| 2020-04-15 21:16:11 |
My daughter was finally returned
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Stewocity, You are also very right. I see it all the time here on my own stories, they don't give me a bad review, just a negative. I did see a number of mistakes, spelling, punctuation and such, but I found the story and its flow very readable. Some stories here are near unreadable and deserve negatives, but your story doesn't. Well done. |
| 2020-04-23 13:48:27 |
My Little Medicine
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Your stories are incredible, but this has now got to be one of my favorites. Great job! |
| 2020-04-24 13:08:16 |
How Polygamy Begins - 4-2
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Dudley, I actually loved A Family Betrayal by Hawkrider, it's probably where I got some of my inspiration for this story. I just hated that he never finished, and actually never read the Alternate ending chapter 39. And its Alleged Incestuous harem; maybe, maybe not;) |
| 2020-05-13 16:08:58 |
Naked Day - part 13 California Dreaming
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One lucky S. O. B! You could do with a little more proofreading, but all in all a great story. |
| 2020-05-22 17:47:55 |
How I met a cam girl that changed my life. Part 2
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To follow up with Chevy, your grammar and spelling is really poor. Your story is readable, but you should try the free version of Grammarly at the very least. |