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Comments from James_Gina
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-03-04 00:40:03 | Summer Fun – Chapter 1 – Help Wanted | Excellent story, you could probably tone down some of the dis criptiveness. Sometimes, as they say, less is more. Also, sometimes you use contractions, and sometimes you don't, be sure you stay consistent. Again, an excellent story. |
| 2021-03-17 03:02:21 | Rachel's Shaved Pussy chapter 1 | Well Done! |
| 2021-06-09 14:44:25 | My sister is changing her preferences | I like the story, but your writing leaves a bit to be desired. The dialog should never have more than one character in a paragraph. I correct one dialog set below so you'll see what I mean. Keep writing, keep improving:) --------- “Damn girl where’s your shirt,” Janet said. Donna chuckled and cupped her breasts “I thought you liked these,” she said. Then licked her nipple. “Well I do, “said Janet, “but my brother doesn’t need to see them , he will have a hard-on all day.” Donna giggled, “I know and I like it.” Janet just shook her head and turned away. "Damn girl last week you had never wanted or seen a hard-on, and now you can’t wait to get your hands on it again”. |
| 2021-10-10 16:50:02 | New Neighbor - Rhonda and Mary-Ann | Wonderful story! I was close friends with a Lesbian many years ago in the Military. It was back in the days of Don't ask, Don't tell. We dated and occasionally had sex for appearance's sake. She took her time to really teach me the art of pleasuring a woman. So this story brought back some good memories. |
| 2021-10-11 16:59:08 | The Siblings: chapter 4, The First Time | A well-written and loving tale of incest at its best. |