| 2019-12-21 18:52:42 |
How Polygamy Begins - 3
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Thank you Chevyzr2, while the story is fiction, I use aspects of my own life, and people I know to make that emotional connection. The names have been changed to protect the guilty.. innocent I mean;) part four is going slow, but I should have it done in January. |
| 2020-01-10 21:25:43 |
Lessons from Grandfather. Part 1
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You need to proof your work. Download the free version of Grammarly, and it will help you immensely. Keep going. |
| 2020-01-10 21:40:25 |
Lessons continued
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So Lexigurl, very sorry someone that should be protecting you did something so horrible. I hope you find your own peace after what that P.O.S. had done to you. Don't know how long ago this happened, but if you want to talk; PM me. |
| 2020-01-14 04:56:26 |
Megan's first job part 3
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Again, great story. You could use some help with your grammar and a few spelling mistakes, and watch the run-on sentences. (just constructive criticism). Keep going! |
| 2020-01-17 19:51:44 |
My Brutal Brothers – Part 1
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So its an okay story, but my guess is that you are not a native English speaker. While I get the point you are trying to get across, it is hard to read because of your poor writing. I suggest you use an English grammar program such as Grammarly. Even the free version would help you. Happy writing! |