| 2019-11-11 15:38:38 |
Raising Peter(Chapter 1
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The 15 chapters have a great story line, but also an unfinished disappointment from 2015! The spelling is bad, needed a good proof reader. If you can overlook the grammar, and spelling, it's a good read. |
| 2019-11-11 16:26:58 |
Potential Part 29
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Hi BiStander, How's it going on chapter 30? |
| 2019-11-13 03:55:14 |
Sins of the Father: Chapter 1
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Good story, and I agree, I hate when people give a negative rate without comments. Takes ten seconds to say something informative. Anyway, keep up the great work. |
| 2019-11-20 23:59:07 |
august pt.2 Unfinished
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The third person is way to distracting to make the story enjoyable for me. If you just write it in first person, you will get a lot more likes. The writing overall isn't bad, just hard to follow the point of view, and several times you change to first person. It's better than the first story, so keep on writing. |
| 2019-12-04 02:47:18 |
How Polygamy Begins - 2
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Chapter 3 published - should be released in a few days. |