| 2020-04-02 22:39:32 |
My Daughter's Phone (part 10)
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So Kevin, I can't PM you because you don't have enough form posts. If you email me at batman.2u at hot mail dot com, I will send you chapter ten proofed with over 200 corrections. So you can see what you are doing wrong. Your two major problems are verb tense and punctuation. |
| 2020-04-03 21:45:01 |
How Polygamy Begins - 4-2
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Haha, the world may never know. Maybe, the girls and his sister were messing with him;) But suffice it to say, Jay's girls are going to keep him on his toes. |
| 2020-04-05 19:09:46 |
How Polygamy Begins - 4-2
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I'm not going to commit Ghost, but I'll try and get part five done in the next month. |
| 2020-04-13 21:59:39 |
How Polygamy Begins - 4-2
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Yes, it could have been his mom, his sister, Angela, Betty, or just one of the other girls fucking with him;) Find out in Chapter 5. |
| 2020-04-15 21:08:58 |
My daughter was finally returned
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Great story, sad at times, but it hits the whole spectrum of emotions. In some respects, the human trafficker has won. Robbyn is what they trained her to be, and that would not be easy to change. But, she was rescued, and is now with someone that loves her and wants her to be happy. You can't change the past, but you can make sure she has a good future. |