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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-09-16 13:40:26 | Solomon's Daughters: Risa's and Kylie's Chapter | A few errors; you need to proofread a little better for grammar errors. HOWEVER, this was a very good read and a well-deserved re-writing for the vampires as well. |
| 2012-09-26 13:25:43 | Solomon's Daughters: Linda's Chapter | Love the story, despise the stopping point. You have a wonderful gift and thank you for sharing it |
| 2012-10-01 07:23:57 | The Librarian and the Bartender, Part two | I do not know why this story would be voted down except out of jealousy. There ARE some issues with presentation but that is strictly a matter of opinion and you have brought off a wonderful story. I hope to see more about these two. |
| 2012-10-02 12:17:55 | Laura, a.k.a. The Little Nympho.. Chapter 11.. (Babysitting Katie) | The problem is not the STORY formatting, the problem is that space making line at the top of the page. If you remove that line and re-submit, I would bet that the story goes back to a readable format. |
| 2012-10-09 01:47:32 | Sister Catherine's Nighmare – CAW 13 | This story was extremely well crafted from start to finish and I apologize for the fact that I have to say that I did not enjoy it. There were parts early on which I did, but the final description of her nightmare itself made me unable to continue to enjoy the story. I read this as part of the CAW even though you state that it is not officially included in that competition and felt that even with my dislike, the story is crafted well enough to be considered if the SOP agrees. NOTE that I am not voting this story either positive or negative here, as I would not have been here except for the CAW |