| 2011-03-31 01:53:37 |
Father/Daughter Bonding_(1)
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Great story and plenty of leeway for sequels. 8/10 |
| 2011-04-01 23:25:40 |
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Definitely different - and really good. I can relate to Adrian, I would place myself as about 80% machine logic and 20% hormonal. Would love to see a sequel where Adrian gains a bit more humanity without resorting to trashy stuff like screwing her mother, eight of her friends and their sisters etc. Could definitely do with some paragraphing to make it easier to read. |
| 2011-04-01 23:32:24 |
Take It Baby
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Good story. Wish chilldude would fuck off. This is not a dating agency for 2" soft dicks. Especially illiterate 2" soft dicks. |
| 2011-04-01 23:39:06 |
Take It Baby
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Good story. Wish chilldude would fuck off. This is not a dating agency for 2 inch soft dicks. Especially illiterate 2 inch soft dicks. Sorry about the re-submission. Stupid bloody program doesn't like quote marks. Sequel to this would be enjoyed/appreciated. 8/10 |
| 2011-04-02 16:03:46 |
Deep Sleeper Ch. 05
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Have to agree with the general consensus , , great story and eagerly awaiting the next instalment. 9/10 |