| 2011-04-12 22:04:57 |
Paladin, Paladin Where Do You Roam
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And yes, Paladin. It was me (last comment/submission). Stinking system logged me out AGAIN |
| 2011-04-13 01:51:11 |
Melody at the waterfall
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Love at first sight - maybe. I grown NO I groan YES. Very enjoyable story. I'll be reading all your stories just to see how good you will become. 7/10 |
| 2011-04-13 02:09:54 |
A Christmas day Mericle with my cousin Lauren
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Anon 15:42:56 OOps. Hoist on my own petard.Sorry and Anon 10:37:44 Not supposed to be believable. At the top it says FICTION |
| 2011-04-13 02:24:56 |
My deepest darkest secret part 1
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Gave positive rating for your guts on writing such a story first time up but you could use paragraphing to make it easier to read. Apart from that I like your moxie little one. Eager to see a follow on. 7/10 |
| 2011-04-13 02:47:34 |
Las Vegas' Best Whore
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Okay, Okay THAT was funny |