| 2011-02-14 22:06:48 |
She Was So Damned Cute!
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Enjoyed the story. Well written, but this is a sex site...more sex. Alexis - Get a big vibrating butt plug, stick it in your horny little pussy, turn it on and wait a couple of years. |
| 2011-02-22 04:27:15 |
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Love it...All the sexiness of the real (and illegal) thing without breaking the law or hurting an innocent. |
| 2011-02-22 04:39:42 |
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I LOVE Fucking preggies and this reminds me of my big bellied wife nearly thirty years ago. |
| 2011-02-22 07:27:00 |
Annie's Craving for Cum
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Good prelim but I prefer stories not serials. Well written though |
| 2011-03-06 16:46:10 |
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Sorry onehand. I gave this story a positive rating because the basic story idea is not explored very often and appeals to me, BUT, too short, not enough character development and not enough description of the sex. Superficial (although that may be a generation gap thing ie you're in twenties and I'm in my sixties) If this is your first effort I'd love to follow your development as a writer. |