| 2012-05-16 15:32:10 |
Pete And Joe Get Laid (Second Stab At Humor In Sex)
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That was funny. Funny and good. Only thing I didn't like about it was the ending. To me it just didn't fit the story, but that's probably just me. |
| 2012-05-16 15:53:22 |
Carnival Knowledge
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Nice romantic interlude. |
| 2012-05-17 13:02:29 |
Clubhouse
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Once again, you prove your writing skills and imagination. I was a little disappointed that Bunny Girl went from a barely Hello girl to popping her head between the dude's legs with virtually no build up, but then it is your fantasy. After all, you did list it as fiction. Great story. |
| 2012-05-17 13:16:24 |
Beginner's Meeting, A Play (Third Stab At Humor)
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That was hilarious. Thanks. |
| 2012-05-17 13:37:49 |
Book Signing
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Very original as are all your stories. I wish I could write with such enthusiasm. |