| 2011-11-14 18:29:33 |
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Pretty cool. Its a shame you don't plan to finish it. Perhaps in time you will change your mind. If not, I'll just settle to read your other stories. |
| 2011-11-19 00:49:44 |
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I started reading this story a few days ago. Not really having a clue what a monoshifter is, I got bored with all the were-this and the were-that. So I quit reading.
Later, under the guise of being fair, I did some research. Your story, Army Tragedy described monoshifters enough to give me at least a hint of what is going on.
I re-read this story with a different perspective. As usual, you proved that you are an exceptional writer. I enjoyed the concept immensely. Keep up the good work. |
| 2011-11-19 01:13:33 |
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Great story. Very heart wrenching. |
| 2011-11-19 23:35:09 |
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Everyone is eagerly anticipating Maren getting a session with Ivy. Too bad you aren't going to give her that thrill. I'll bet you could give the scene a little pizzazz. I love your stories. |
| 2011-11-25 00:42:35 |
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Wow. I like the way you captured the way a woman feels about doing her dog the first time. The hesitation and the burning desire. Not wanting him and yet having to have him at the same time. And the brother scene was hot. Keep up the good work. |