| 2019-01-20 05:12:15 |
A Kitten and Her Master
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I enjoyed the story and am hoping you post some more. |
| 2019-03-08 09:22:37 |
From college student to slave - Part 2: The punishment
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For the most part the story idea is alright. Yet the way the story flows seams rushed. You could take some extra time to get from on part of the story to the next. |
| 2019-03-08 09:30:49 |
The Harem Pt.2
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First issue is the wall of text. now this is probably more due to the site then you but you probably should define your paragraphs before pasting the story by placing something between them so the site doesn't loose them. |
| 2020-08-12 10:05:28 |
Taking the Maid 2
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Great story please keep the chapters coming. But please also consider letting her keep the maid's uniform or at least a sexer version for a scene or two. |
| 2020-08-12 10:08:24 |
Katie is Devious (complete)
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Great story hopping you continue it as I'm not the only one who wants to see what she comes up with for the other two. |