| 2010-12-06 17:27:07 |
Roomies - The Habit [Part II]
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This is an awesome story and I want more! |
| 2010-12-06 17:50:11 |
Our new neighbors
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I hope you do more, including the girls next door. :) |
| 2011-05-11 13:18:32 |
My first Time_(57)
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Nice concept for a story. Fill it out and tell it with all the details like you would read it in a novel. Add dialog and build up the story. Text stories are all about the words and the adventure. |
| 2011-05-11 13:33:50 |
Club Inflictions...Part 1
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I copy all my stories to wordpad before uploading, try that. |
| 2011-05-18 08:46:55 |
A One Time 3 of a Kind (part 1)
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More build up would set the mood better and make it feel more real. |