| 2011-07-06 15:56:40 |
Sailing with my daughter and friend
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Now this was truly excellent. 10/10 |
| 2011-07-06 15:59:05 |
The Runner_(0)
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Very erotic. Nice story. |
| 2011-07-07 10:40:27 |
My girlfriend and bestfriend
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Nice story idea, but you really need to cut it into paragraphs. Otherwise, generally good, some grammar issues, but readable. Could be expanded to more than a quickey. |
| 2011-07-13 17:43:13 |
Package Deal 3
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Sorry about spacing. I had more blank lines there, but they must have accidentally gotten formatted out. |
| 2011-07-15 15:23:21 |
Package Deal 3
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I might. This one really tapped my fantasies so I felt I had to get it out. If another of his stories does that I well may make some sequels. |