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Comments from Tash88
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-11-19 20:19:29 | The Great O Race | I very much enjoyed the story. It was well written and I particularly liked the original storyline. I hope you will decide to write more of these in the future! ~ Tash |
| 2016-12-19 09:44:15 | Cock Teaser Reward | I enjoyed the story. Both the story and the torture were built up well and it really was all about revenge rather than it turning into a sex-adventure midway. Only point of constructive criticism is to avoid using the same words/sentences right after one another, play around with synonyms a bit. Please keep writing. ~ Tash |
| 2017-03-09 06:37:22 | Breaking the Cheerleader | Despite it being a rather short story to 'fully' describe a training from A to Z, it does the job amazingly well. I very much enjoyed the read. Thank you! However, would she truly forget her past life and her -no doubt lingering- hatred for this man? Brave to let her near kitchen knives when it is just the two of them... Regards, Tash |
| 2018-02-15 15:43:37 | I hate you big brother! | I enjoyed this story very much. You write well, you made the situation quite realistic with the bodily responses and you have some original ideas (beating to contract the abdominal muscles for better anal sex, very creative!). A few spelling errors though -check your text before submitting- but hell, we all have some in our work. Keep writing! ~ Tash |
| 2018-02-15 16:13:18 | RAPED ON THE WAY TO WORK | I actually liked the story, it was gripping. It made me smile knowing her own vanity actually turned against her (staying on the bus because it rained despite the attack). You write well too. However, the problem lies in how realistic it is. Say, you pull the girl on your lap in beteeen seats and threaten her from behind while fucking her, then maybe it could be done. But there is no way no one noticed. No way she would choose to get assaulted rather than scream or let go of the rail (although every person responds uniquely to the situation). On her knees raped by 12 men? Quite noticeable. And I doubt EVERYONE was in on it. Give that part some thought. |