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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-09 22:43:00 | mom is my birday call girl | I couldn't find part 2? |
| 2018-07-09 23:05:39 | Childhood Friends_(1) | Good story, well written. Don't know why it is under Prostitution, Why not Teen male/teen female. I expected the guy to order a call girl & one of his school chums shows up & they end up rekindling a hot romance. |
| 2018-07-13 02:04:19 | A twisted game - Part 4 | Surprise, Surprise I expected the parents to join in & make it a foursome. Don't forget Abigail & Cale. If they got together that could make another foursome. That's the direction I expected this to go, but I'm not a creative author. Just another dirty old man reader & fantasy seeker. I like your scenario and sexy scenes; characters seem to like depth. Any technical errors as punctuation, syntax, spelling, ect. Any such errors were lost in the story line & action. I didn't see except in the first installment where you got first, second, & third person mixed up, which you caught yourself. Good work! Looking forward to the next installments. |
| 2018-07-13 02:04:24 | A twisted game - Part 4 | Surprise, Surprise I expected the parents to join in & make it a foursome. Don't forget Abigail & Cale. If they got together that could make another foursome. That's the direction I expected this to go, but I'm not a creative author. Just another dirty old man reader & fantasy seeker. I like your scenario and sexy scenes; characters seem to like depth. Any technical errors as punctuation, syntax, spelling, ect. Any such errors were lost in the story line & action. I didn't see except in the first installment where you got first, second, & third person mixed up, which you caught yourself. Good work! Looking forward to the next installments. |
| 2018-07-13 15:07:12 | Friends Only | fully agree with the comment (1st) that I can see. Tastefully presented, well written, Believable scenario (with such a predespossed attitude in the mom). I look forward to reading more of your submissions. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. To add to flippet's suggestion, what about Donnie's seductions of a sweet young thing that really gets turned on to his experience and is willing to do a foursome with his mom & dad. (Do you think Dad would turn down an opportunity with a 16-18 yo eager & excited girl, to her newly awakened desire for sex, to explore possibilities & new ideas?) |