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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2018-07-08 17:51:41 | Meeting James Chapter 2 | Your details are so vivid in deion, my guess is you have done extensive research to make your stories as accurate as possible. Your use of words to create the atmosphere right here in this room as I read is close to a transportation (me being right there in the room watching it happen). One thing that is surprising to me (yet obvious), with Melanie's accounting studies, James hasn't offered her a PT job to follow up on his LV locations to prevent Asst Mgrs or anyone else scarfing profits. Interesting how I can take a twist & expansion of your creativity, but have none of my on. You are marvelous. |
| 2018-07-08 18:50:56 | Meeting James Chapter 3 | I agree with most of the comments (except the negiaive). You are still marvelous. If allowed to, I would vote positive on every story or part of story or chapter here., but we are limited on the number of events that we can vote., I'm out of votes for the day. Being retired @ 76 frequently I have a "little extra time" More later as the story progresses. |
| 2018-07-08 20:28:58 | Meeting James Chapter 4 | Fantastic as usual. I can't come up with enough adjitives to describe your supurb talent. Seems to me Ginnia's boyfriend might enjoy a trio with Gin & another Bi girl. That would be one way for her to introduce him to the eroticism of watching two girls excite & make each other climax(69). He shouldn't object to her girly activities after that as long as he gets his share. The atmosphere you create goes beyond any gramar errors you might make. |
| 2018-07-08 21:38:23 | Meeting James Chapter 5 | That was a complete surprise. Good writing. About all I can do is just repeat what I've already said. So far. this seems to be one of your shorter chapters. I like all of it. |
| 2018-07-09 00:05:32 | Meeting James Chapter 6_(0) | Actually U just keep getting better & better.Each chapter becomes more & more erotic than the last. You also employed the surprise element of girly sex to further arouse James. He is portrayed as a very senestive "reader of people." to realize the effect Flame & Melanie's chemistry would blend so well together. It is a constant guess as to what James is going to come up with next! Good suspense & drama Anything else I might say, has already been said! |