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Comments from starrynight
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-13 20:51:52 | How Traditions Start – part 19 | Muito obrigado Thiago. I appreciate your comment and happy that you enjoyed the series so far. Next chapter should be out soon. |
| 2021-05-07 20:50:35 | Emma's Brother and His Buddies | Overall decent effort but you still have a way to go. Try putting more effort into the plot to make it more realistic. Getting straight to the sex part made no real sense, and I felt like there was some inconsistency in the sex. Also, I found the dialogue a bit lacking. The things the siblings said to each other didn't sounds very genuine. Keep writing. You'll get there. |