| 2020-05-06 17:48:53 |
Curious Siblings (Part 1)
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very good story for someone getting started. pacing, grammar and layout where quite good. I would suggest giving more thought to the dialog. Not only what they call each other, but also try to get into their heads, how brother and sister talk to each other. |
| 2020-06-23 05:31:43 |
How Traditions Start – part 13
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I am sorry to disappoint some of you with this chapter. I appreciate the comments and hope the next few chapters will meet your expectations. You must understand that in writing this part I look at the entire series as a whole. It needs to make sense on the story level and be realistic, but don't worry, in the end you won't be disappointed |
| 2020-07-12 20:02:29 |
How Traditions Start – part 14
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Sorry you feel that way albertofatto, but judging by the top rated stories section and the numerous PMs I received, it seems like most do not share your opinion. |
| 2020-08-06 15:29:50 |
How Traditions Start – part 15
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Fuckwhore, I'm honored that my stories had such an impact on you. For someone to feel so strongly about them that he is willing to work so hard to demote them just shows how thought provoking they are. Thanks. |
| 2020-10-29 18:47:14 |
How Traditions Start – Part 16
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Thanks for all your comments and support. I have been working hard on the series and plan on publishing the next two chapters together. I also have some very interesting side project which will hopefully be published soon. |