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Comments from UndeniableUrges
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-08-29 18:42:27 | My Summer as a Girl part 1 | Like your story. Very sweet and realistic. Curious to know how slutty Michelle is going to be? Uncles? Cowboys? A little unasked for constructive criticism, I thought the dialogue was a bit formal. Perfect English. Clear, concise statements. Just, maybe more contractions? Shorter words? Less words? Example; “I wanted you to do it but I realized I didn't want it done in front of me.” “I'm sorry. I should have considered your feelings first. Next time, I'll do it when you aren't around.” "I wanted you to..., at first." "Sorry. I'll do it when you aren't around next time." Looking forward to more chapters in this story! UU |
| 2021-08-29 21:19:36 | Doggy Styles 6 - Sultan’s Reward | Thanks for the comments. The mean a lot to me (and the other authors). @roxan brown. Us uniformed pick Danes to write about because we've been led to believe they have the largest cocks. Simple as that. Thanks for your insight. I used your input on my latest DS 10 story. UU |
| 2021-09-04 09:42:14 | Doggy Styles 10 - The Dog Walker | I glad you like it. It is a fun series to write. |
| 2021-09-05 16:17:27 | First Impressions | Nice to see you again! |
| 2021-09-05 16:17:47 | First Impressions | Nice to see you again! |