| 2014-02-02 11:17:28 |
The Girl Scout -23 -- RUN BITCH RUN
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Could have been better written in a few places, perhaps more proof reading needed but I did find the ways she was humiliated exciting! I will have to start reading these stories from Part 1. |
| 2014-02-02 11:17:39 |
The Girl Scout -23 -- RUN BITCH RUN
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Could have been better written in a few places, perhaps more proof reading needed but I did find the ways she was humiliated exciting! I will have to start reading these stories from Part 1. |
| 2014-02-02 11:17:42 |
The Girl Scout -23 -- RUN BITCH RUN
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Could have been better written in a few places, perhaps more proof reading needed but I did find the ways she was humiliated exciting! I will have to start reading these stories from Part 1. |
| 2015-02-12 02:42:49 |
Lynette's Last Flight
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Nicely written, though the post mortem part isn't to my taste. |
| 2015-02-12 19:40:15 |
The Gaunching of Eloise
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I do wonder whether some people read the title and themes before wasting their time on what's clearly not going to be a pleasant ending. |