| 2012-01-14 10:08:02 |
3 Evil Sisters-Part 4_(0)
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Maybe you could have him go back to the house, where Izzy, Ashley, and Riley want max sexually. Wouldn't be bad of a foursome. But, I'm also temped to keep up the drama. Maybe they can treat him like shit again after their big sexcapade, and Max loses it completely. |
| 2012-01-25 02:20:43 |
3 Evil Sisters-Part 4_(1)
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While it did take you a while to post this, it seems rushed. I noticed a few errors that would've been seen if you proofread it. Please start releasing these faster if possible. |
| 2012-02-06 07:07:25 |
A Planned Rape Turned Into Love.
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Wasn't even worth my read. Horrible grammar, horrible story. Please stick with writing kiddy books. |
| 2012-02-06 12:05:08 |
Wife's betrayal of a solider
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Thanks, both of you. I know my stories are short, and kinda suck, but I enjoy writing. I was thinking of making a part two, and have it be from Shayna's point of view. |
| 2012-02-16 20:02:38 |
Death while on duty
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Thank you, Anon. I did my best. |