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Comments from BiStander
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-06-21 19:57:01 | Finding a treasure at Winn-Dixie | It was Teen Male/Female. There is no category for teen Male/pre-teen female, so that is what you get. I suck at comma for sure. Any you feel like pointing out, I will take into my brain and use later. I actually have software that is supposed to help me, but it doesn't. Didn't anyone notice I used isle and not aisle? |
| 2009-06-22 13:06:58 | My Neighbor's Incest Part VI (revised) | 180boi, Nothing really that makes it worth reading again. If the SN and JM didn't bother you, just wait for VII. I thought I changed more, but my brain was confused. I probably should have just left well enough alone, but I had to have it fixed. I still have not received one reply from the admin. |
| 2009-06-23 22:59:33 | My Neighbor's Incest Part VI (revised) | Yes, there is more coming. Sorry it's been so long, I got caught up in Win-Dixie, and reading some other good stories on this site. I really want to work on this one, I miss my first love, Susan. |
| 2009-06-23 19:06:22 | Finding a treasure at Winn-Dixie | Actually, I find it easy to ignore those like anonymous. Tenth grader looking for attention, that's all. It bothers when I make mistakes, so feel free to be constructive. I can hopefully not make the same often. |
| 2009-06-28 15:29:50 | Finding a treasure at Winn-Dixie | "Fruit of the Loops". Dude, I am sorry. I see when I read stories how these things jump out at me. I read my stories so many times my brain just goes right past that stuff. I'll keep trying to not have those things happen. Thanks all for the kind words and for pointing out the errors. That helps. I'm working on part two. Also on part VII of the other story. BiStander |