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Comments from YoungAuthor
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-02-20 20:59:31 | 3 Gay Guys 1 Sleepover part 3 | sloppily written |
| 2009-03-26 14:59:06 | Jokingly Gay | this was an interesting idea. with some more time and work, it could be a lot better. |
| 2009-04-08 17:17:11 | Guardian Angel Chapter 2 | every couple sentences, you switch between past and present tense. good story idea, just doublecheck your work before you post it. |
| 2009-08-06 21:33:15 | Boyfriend Sex Pt. 1 | that really sucks for kyle. :P why didn't david want to have sex with kyle? |
| 2009-11-27 02:50:35 | Close Your Eyes Little Girly Boy | You are an excellent writer. It's easy to tell, even from these sex stories. Please continue with not only these stories, but your other writing as well. : ) your friend, the Young Author |