| 2020-01-21 07:30:39 |
The Coach's Wife - Chapter 01
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Magazine was Oui, not Qui. |
| 2020-01-21 07:45:17 |
My most memorable erotic experience
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Poor build uo; too quick |
| 2020-01-25 15:26:29 |
My First Sexual Experience_(0)
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Looking forward to the next summer's love. |
| 2020-01-27 16:45:43 |
Wild time_(2)
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Ever her of paragraph? |
| 2020-01-28 06:55:37 |
Childhood friend and far far beyond .... Part 1
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Never Pls for please. Your writing shows shows from promise. Butyou need an editor and someone to teach grammar, U underscore the first two comments. Rewrite demo a 3rd person POVrather than shifting. |