| 2019-12-17 04:54:36 |
Boating Holiday
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I don't care about punctuation either but I didn't think the story was well written. Maybe it's basically accurate but it didn't read that way. The sex actually sounded boring. |
| 2019-12-17 05:03:44 |
Budding Temptations pt. I
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Very intriguing beginning! Bring on part 2 please. |
| 2019-12-19 04:47:57 |
Patient and Strong
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Well, it’s a good concept but so much over-the-top de***********ion the sex gets lost. I’d prefer a more direct approach. By the time I reached the actual sex, I was losing interest. Considering the low rating, I’d say other readers had similar opinions. |
| 2019-12-27 03:34:38 |
Dakota_(0)
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It could've been hotter and the ending was too quick as well as unlikely. |
| 2019-12-27 03:37:54 |
Daddy’s Touches and Brother’s Actions
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The "daddy" part was excellent! Very sexy but the "brother" part wasn't as good. |