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Comments from doll1
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-07-27 02:50:37 | Shelly's Secret Chapter 4 | To Zorro 18088. How very kind of you to leave such a positive comment on our story. Not many readers today take the time to respond anymore. I have always felt a special bond to the Shelly’s Secret series for obvious reasons. I am so glad that you found our relationship as beautiful as we have. Not everyone sees it this way. Please enjoy some of our other stories. I look forward to hearing from you again. Shelly (doll1) |
| 2021-03-10 03:25:28 | The Houseguest Part 2 | Loved the entire story, but where the heck do those demons come from? When they slip in, the story goes to new level. The narrative changes from a tale about infatuation and raw sex, to a very personal look into just what is buried deep in Jacosta’s psyche. Very well done! |
| 2021-03-06 15:07:20 | Tomboy - 1 | It seems like in every guy’s youth there was a Danni. Mine was named Sandy. A girl like that left life-long memories in a lot of men’s brains. Always wondered what happened to her? Anyway thanks for re-kindling long-ago fond memory.. |
| 2021-03-03 15:22:55 | The Houseguest | This was a very enjoyable read. A story of this length does contain typo errors which are often easily missed by the author. You have also discovered if you have re-read this post that the site removes or masks certain words (not your fault) This is a technical issue for the site, but it does wreck the flow of a story to have words ****ed out. You will just have to learn them and avoid using them. I would suggest one other improvement, and again it is more on how your text gets posted to the story section. The paragraphs display differently than on your processor. They become very short looking. It’s just a visual thing more than content. Otherwise, this was a very good first effort. Great character development also. |
| 2021-03-18 20:48:11 | Doggy Styles 9 - The Dog Groomer | I really enjoyed reading this. The dialog between the characters pulls you in. It is as if you are a voyeur in the same room with them. Great job! |