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Comments from terdon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-03-29 13:00:46 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 5 | Hawkrider, I have read two of your other stories which have posted and thoroughly enjoyed them - those being "Truths and Betrayals of A Young Man's Heart" and "A Family At Odds". With these two stories and this new one I'm finding that the sex isn't as important as the story itself, as with Anonymous: 2015-3-29 11:25:58, I'm also interested in what happened to cause the split in Heath's immediate family (ie; his mother, brother & sister). While I'm waiting for your next update of this story I'll read the rest of the stories you've posted. Thank You for posting your stories as I'm thoroughly enjoying them. |
| 2015-06-12 16:42:04 | A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue | Just finished reading the conclusion to your story "A Game of Inches", I thoroughly enjoyed it and had difficulty taking breaks from reading the story (ie: sleep, meals, work, etc), I was a little bit disappointed that we didn't get read about Brian's times with Courtney before she passed on. I feel that would have added substance to story showing the grief Brian had surmount in his journey. I don't know what happened to chapters 5 and 9 but would dearly love to see them added back into the story. Again I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED this story, please keep writing and I'll looking for anything more bring out. TERDON |
| 2015-09-27 13:42:34 | A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue | I've read this story at least a dozen times, and I'm reduced to tears every time when I get to the chapters where Courtney dies and when Brian dies and Alexis visits his gravesite. I could come back and reread this story in 10 years and be affected by this story as I have the last twelve times. WELL DONE!!!!! |
| 2015-10-15 00:29:30 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 39 alternate ending | Hawkrider,I'm wondering if you could pm me the other endings for "a family betrayal" and "it's a good day to die" please. I'm another reader who has been checking frequently to see if any new chapters of these stories have been posted, I'm hoping that you do as I've been enjoying your stories. |
| 2015-10-15 23:01:00 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 39 alternate ending | Hawkrider,I'm wondering if you could pm me the other endings for "a family betrayal" and "it's a good day to die" please. I'm another reader who has been checking frequently to see if any new chapters of these stories have been posted, I'm hoping that you do as I've been enjoying your stories. |