| 2014-09-23 22:38:55 |
She is the One (Part 16)
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Morgen fruh :) |
| 2014-08-29 04:10:18 |
Morning Bells (edited for spacing)
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Very intriguing :) I'll be interested to see where it goes from here. One suggestion: making your chapters longer wouldn't hurt, especially if you can find the right note to end on. Looking forward to more! |
| 2014-08-20 16:04:40 |
She is the One (Part 12)
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Halfway done with the next chapter, I mean. |
| 2014-08-20 16:02:14 |
She is the One (Part 12)
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Hey everyone! Halfway done. Woohoo! I have the day off of work so I'm going to try to get a huge chunk finished today. Fingers-crossed! |
| 2014-08-18 19:02:51 |
Being More Social - Chapter 4
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Really good job :) i enjoyed the other chapters but this was the first where I really felt like it came to life so kudos. I got a little confused at some points because I think Megan and May's names may have been mixed up (try saying that five times fast) but otherwise great work and I can't wait to see the next part! |