| 2014-10-20 23:51:28 |
Until we meet again :)
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Already have you bookmarked on the new site and look forward to reading your stories there. I'm so sorry there are miscreants and lowlife thugs, who wouldn't know a great story if you programmed it into their nearly non-existent brains, that seem hell-bent on trying to destroy one of the best series I've ever read on this site. Can't wait to read the furthers adventures of Jack and Kayla and friends and BTW, the cliffhanger at the end of Chapter 19 is a killer. |
| 2014-09-10 00:16:13 |
A Good man
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Interesting beginning. Looking forward to more. |
| 2014-09-11 23:03:31 |
Is She Worth It? -Chapter 1
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Promising start but please work on your spacing. Looking forward to the next installment. |
| 2014-09-12 02:07:17 |
She is the One (Part 16)
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I can see Tara and Kayla being enough alike to where they would end up experimenting. Jack is always apologizing to Kayla. Maybe Jack should catch them in the act and let Kayla be the one to come crying back.....or at least INSIST Jack join them. I would have no problem with a threesome if it's done right. The point is that they ARE teenagers after all and don't always make the best decisions. Just chalk it up to a painful part of learning about life. |
| 2014-09-11 21:45:34 |
She is the One (Part 16)
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Once again, WELL DONE! Nice touch with The Impossible Dream. Great, great song! And it's nice to get back to "girl drama" for a bit after all that ass-kicking. OK, I couldn't say that with a straight face but you know what I mean. |