| 2013-03-10 04:42:55 |
Aaron's New Stepsister, Part 1 of 3
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@previous anon Umm, that's the point...he's a spoiled and immature college football star who expects everything to go his way. Later installments have him grow as a person and mature because of love. I'll admit that there are several flaws in this story as it is my first one but the point that you described is completely intentional. Having a protagonist with intentional flaws that he eventually learns from is not necessarily a flaw in the story. You're SUPPOSED to think he's being unreasonable and spoiled in order to help appreciate his character growth later. |