| 2008-04-24 19:15:33 |
Ben 10 and the New Alien Chapter 9
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I certainly don't have anything against anyone else writing a Ben 10 story, if you have an idea go for it. |
| 2008-05-13 19:37:18 |
Ben 10 and the New Alien Chapter 10
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The story may be getting close to the end but it isn't there yet, I have a few more chapters before it's done. By the way, there is a reason why Ben is knocking up so many girls, but things won't be revealed until the last chapter. I'll try and get the next one out soon but I'm in the middle of moving and fighting a cold at the same time. On top of that it looks like this could be a long chapter, long enough that I may end up splitting it into two chapters but I haven't decided on that yet. I will post the new chapter as soon as I can, I'm just not sure when that will be yet. |
| 2008-05-13 19:42:40 |
Ben 10 and the New Alien Chapter 10
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I hope I'm not repeating myself here but it looks like my comment didn't post so I'll try again. The story is getting close to the end but there's a few more chapters to go. I'll post the next one as soon as I can but I'm in the middle of a move and fighting a cold so I can't put in as much work as I'd like on it. On top of that it looks like it's going to be a long chapter, long enough that I may decide to turn it into two chapters instead of one. Either way it could be a few days before I'm able to post it. By the way, there's a reason why Ben is fucking and knocking up so many girls, but the reason won't be revealed until the last chapter so you'll just have to wait and see what happens. |
| 2008-07-26 16:52:19 |
Ben 10 and the New Alien Chapter 13
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patlaborvi here with a question for any readers who want to comment. A few chapters back a couple readers told me that I made a big mistake with the story by having Ben fuck and impregnate so many girls but by that time I already knew where I was going with the story and didn't want to make a comment because I didn't want to give away the end of the story. Now that the story is ended I was wondering if anyone still thought I made a mistake with Ben impregnating Gwen and all the other girls. |
| 2008-08-15 20:43:14 |
Jason's Little Family: The Beginning Chapter 2
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The beginning refers to the fact that the original Jason's Little Family takes place thirteen years after the current one. |