| 2009-09-03 12:24:16 |
Grandfather Gets A Hardon
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My bad. I'm new at this, and I missed it. - FT |
| 2009-10-03 02:00:15 |
The Break Down
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Very good, pleasant, and a nice first attempt at fiction. Still a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing excessive or that I felt really detracted from the story. Keep up the good work. |
| 2009-10-03 02:16:48 |
The Break Down
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Very good, pleasant, and a nice first attempt at fiction. Still a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing excessive or that I felt really detracted from the story. Keep up the good work. |