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Comments from SeriousWriter
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2022-02-13 22:48:02 | My dog took advantage of me and made me his cum dump | I'm sorry, but this story is quite badly written. The pacing is all over the place, the sentences are way to long and worded confusingly. I had to read the story twice just to figure out if the protagonist is a boy or girl, and am not quite sure even now. Plus, the actual event doesn't get enough attention in my opinion, and all is over way to quickly. Sorry, but you should have taken your time while writing this story. It feels to me like you were rushing through it. |