| 2020-09-14 17:24:43 |
Blue Balls 1 - Introducing Tiffany
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I grew up with 4 sisters, this definitely struck a nerve! Well written, looking forward to more TT! |
| 2020-09-14 18:38:04 |
Blue Balls 4 - Poor Theo!
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Ahh, brings back such fond memories! |
| 2021-03-09 14:14:49 |
Being More Social - Chapters 1-5
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Your writing is first-rate! You spend the time to develop the characters, (and characters they are!) The sex is great, the emotions real, can't wait to read the rest! |
| 2021-03-12 18:51:32 |
Being More Social - Chapters 16-20
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I could spend all day with superlatives, fantastic job! Everything was spot on. Only fly in the ointment is when Nicole is correcting Adam's grammar with "Megan and I", it is actually "Megan and me". (subjective case) A few other similar instances, but that's my only nit to pick! Congratulations on great work! |