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Comments from Jackhauf
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-23 21:28:43 | Lust of an ooze. | Ngl Barry this is better writing than a lot of your other stories, in the past you've gone solely for quantity over quality it seems and constantly had a bunch of errors but this was pretty well written. You've got great ideas you just need to spend a bit more time to polish them, keep it up! |
| 2019-07-24 04:13:59 | Cryptid Unleashed | Great story! Good world building and I loved the effort in giving the characters personality and dialogue, keep it up! |