| 2019-01-10 01:11:57 |
The Secret Cheerleader Vote - #9
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Red Czar, I agree with the other posts; you are a very talented writer! Secret Cheerleader Vote is, by far, the best erotica story I have ever read. |
| 2018-12-15 21:36:56 |
Hearts
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Thank you both, for reading and offering advice. I have posted the second installment of this story, incorporating White Walls suggestion re: dialog, let me know what you think! |
| 2018-12-16 00:21:46 |
Well, That Backfired 2_(0)
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Incredible story White Walls! You are a talented writer that I can lean from and will be following stories! |
| 2018-12-19 01:45:39 |
One day after school_(0)
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Excellent story, you are a talented writer. |
| 2018-12-30 19:12:35 |
Hearts
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Part 2 is up, but it hasn't received many reads yet. Not sure why, it has more sex than part 1. Also, I have submitted the first part of another story that hopefully will be posted next week when they start posting again. It, like this story, has some truthful elements to it, but the fantasy portion is far more expanded. More like the wife's dream birthday, rather than the one I gave her. Hope you will take a look at it and if you're a writer, please offer constructive comments, as they are always appreciated. |