| 2017-06-27 15:06:01 |
Sleeping Sister_(0)
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She's gotta look skeletal, 85 pounds and THAT tall? She would have no ass or tits, I have an ex that's 5'9 and 120 lbs and she BARELY has anything, take off 40 lbs from that... I'm pretty sure she'd be almost dead. Don't write a part 2 until you learn how to actually write, the sentence structure and grammar were fucking horrible. I got a headache from reading just the first paragraph. |
| 2017-06-27 15:10:29 |
Sleeping Sister Part 2
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Stop writing. Your grammar, spelling, and sentence structure make it very hard to read. It's not even got anymore, I have a fetish for this sort of thing but your writing is so atrocious my pussy dries up faster than I could finish the first paragraph. |
| 2017-06-27 15:12:09 |
Sleeping Sister Part 3
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Whoever said "great writing skills" is full of shit. The writing here is horrible. Take an English class or two and then try writing another story. |
| 2017-06-27 15:14:17 |
AJ Lee, Paige and Nikki Bella
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Please don't ever write again. |
| 2017-07-10 02:43:57 |
Staying Close to My Sister (and Mom)_(2)
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"baby goo"? "Fuckstick"? That was the least sexiest thing you could have written. Please don't ever write that again. |